Ramone's English Journal

Have you seen were I’ve used metaphor and alliteration in my poem

If you have time can you please comment and see if you noticed the sense of touch, taste, hear, see and smell

What do you think my poem was about and what or who it was based on

He was as fast as using bolt
She was as fast as Jessica ennes
they were out of breath
they had sweat of their heads
These 2 special elements were having a race

they were going in different directions

But what could they be
The sun the moon

When bolts on winning he’s practically on fire

and when Jessica is winning she’s practically lighting up

What could it be I wonder who