Strengths: This story clearly demonstrates that you have taken a lot of notice of some of the grammar strategies we covered in class. You use a variety of adverbials and some noun phrases too. Advice: What you need to work… Continue Reading →
This is the student feedback you received on your Dystopian writing – if you want a reminder of what the colour coding meant – you can go back to the class site at any time and review the instruction video: http://waugh7.www.edutronic.net/grammar-project-guide-to-annotation/
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