Colin changed by seeing how serious cancer is and also by being with your family makes them a lot more happier.Griff didn’t have anyone by his side except for ted and that made Griff very happy.
“The sick people who had their families and loved ones around their beds all looked happier than the ones who didn’t”
This shows that when your with your family it makes then a lot more happier because your their beside them.
March 18, 2013 at 8:15 pm
This is a very nicely formed response to the question. You’re definitely ready to write more extended pieces.
A note: Instead of writing “more happier”, you should write “happier” or “more happy”